Fireworks

 

I was learning about onomatopoeia and where you could use it in your writing.

I showed kairangi in my writing by taking my time and stopping to think what I should add into my poem.

 I showed whai whaiwhakaaro in my writing by making it interesting and adding alliteration similes.

Ancient Creature

 

                                

 I am focussing on being a communicator and being able to share my ideas through writing.  My focus was to share my ideas by making it interesting and easy to read.  

I use a variety of sentence starters and I used a couple of similes to describe the creature to the readers and my sentence starters make my writing interesting.

I need to work on adding more description to my writing and I will do that by learning more ways to write descriptively.