We were learning about who discovered New Zealand first and how they discovered it.
I found it easy to add the colour to the background because I liked to change the colour and merge it with other colours.
I found it hard to talk about how the whalers hunted the whales and what they used to kill them.
I enjoyed writing what I needed to write because it felt good researching how life was tough back then.
Next time I need to research on one web site so I don't waste any time and when I'm writing I should pay more attention to my facts that I have recorded in my notes.
Hi Jodi. I'm Holly, and I really liked the way you included in your story how the walers and the maori made a strong bond. Next time you could add a bit more detail on how the whalers arrived or did they get welcomed? I also liked how you put red orange and yellow as your background, I think it looks cool! Goodbye, I enjoyed looking at your learning!
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ReplyDeleteHi it is Hazel. I really like your writing about early life in NZ and you added lots of detail in your Writing. I liked the way that you put yellow and orange , red, as your background. and I like the colour of it , I like the way that you chose the whalers you chose something different have a good day bye bye.